BCM302 FEEDBACK 2
The two beta pitches I will be reviewing are: Verity’s “I hope she knows” Instagram account and Grace’s “Wollongong women” platform.
Grace’s feedback:
https://gracegoll.wordpress.com/2020/10/18/bcm302-beta/
Grace’s project is called Wollongong Women which is a platform for local female run businesses to collaborate and connect. I think that the concept behind Wollongong women is great and you have clearly found a niche within your audience.
I think you have a clear understanding of your market and have taken this opportunity to grow on Facebook. I have seen with my own DA and on Instagram that platforms who showcase other businesses do really well and have very high levels of engagement.
I would suggest experimenting with more Instagram features such as reels or IGTV as I think it would allow you page to be seen by more people. I think that the idea to do Instagram takeovers would be a great and you could then re-purpose this content for the website or Facebook as well. I think in the long run you could also turn Wollongong women into a weekly podcast where you showcase and interview these businesses and how they came to be. Additionally, to monetise your brand you could make your blog subscription based so that people pay a fee. This could make your brand seem more exclusive and would encourage businesses to sign up so that don’t miss out and would also allow you to make a profit. Here are some examples: https://www.uscreen.tv/blog/12-successful-subscription-sites-and-what-theyre-doing-right/
I really love your aesthetic and think it appeals to your target market very well and think that there is a really big ability for you to monetise the brand and make something big out of it.
Verity’s feedback:
https://beerwithv.wordpress.com/2020/10/22/bccm302-project-beta-i-hope-she-knows/
Verity’s digital artefact is an Instagram with the intention of communicating Women’s health issues. Firstly, I think that your beta video is so creative and aesthetic and I enjoyed watching your project develop from the pitch to now.
I agree with you that you should apply video content as it is shown to be more successful with the Instagram algorithm rather than picture posts. (https://mention.com/en/blog/video-engagement-instagram/) You could also turn your most successful Instagram posts into reels so that your audience is still engaged visually and the information is in smaller 30 second portions. Additionally, I think you have utilised the Instagram polls, questions and quiz feature on Instagram story successfully.
In order to grow your brand in the future, you could collaborate with other accounts or even medical professionals. For example, once a month you could have a female medical professional or even a strong female figure to takeover on your Instagram stories for the day or even do an Instagram live with them in order to communicate advice in real-time and your audience could ask them questions as well.
I like the colours used within your colour scheme but I think they could be used more within your Instagram in order to build a better brand image as your audience would then resonate those colours with your brand.
Overall I really love the aesthetic of your Instagram and think you have found a great niche. You have a creative ability which I think is utilised well within your Instagram.